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by ^NicSwaner

While I like the opening line, I think overall this reads like an early draft of what could end up being a good poem. This isn't fully coherent yet. The hard work you have to do to try to piece anything out of this isn't paid off, and much of the ambiguity isn't from a literary quality, but from la...

by `vespera

This is devastating genius:I have wanted to return – Won't you tuck me in and whisper to me about home, the restitution and the earthy womb? the quiet – O', Sylvia, tell me of the quiet. Consider my soul somewhat in awe and ajitter. You asked for suggestions about enjambment, so here g...





The only thing worse than being talked about is not being talked about.

—Oscar Wilde

 

daily deviation (and a forgotten DLD)

Journal Entry: Sun Feb 24, 2013, 7:09 PM




they like me, they really like me!

I’m pleasantly surprised and genuinely touched that my flash fiction piece, "A Thing Now: A Two-Sentence Story," received my second ever daily deviation yesterday. I sure wasn’t expecting that, and I couldn’t be happier about it, because that tiny little story is one of my personal favorites.

It really is only two sentences long, so you have no excuse not to read it. You can find it here:



Be sure to check out the Easter Eggs, which are legion in this piece. They really are an essential part of the story. If you are reading the story in the Chrome browser and can’t find all of them, here’s a little secret: if you use Firefox, all of the Easter Eggs have dotted underlines beneath them. Just hover over them and the secret is revealed!

Also, huge love to =LadyofGaerdon for suggesting it and ^neurotype for featuring it.

seriously, tonepainter, you are lame!

So, somehow I failed to take note of a DLD I received back in November for my poem, "Williwaws and Halny." The truth is, life has been a little crazy lately, and I haven’t been as all together on dA as I usually am. I’m working hard to change that…we’ll see.

Anyway, it’s a poem about earth, wind, and fire. It’s especially about those incredibly powerful ill winds that can blow away our humanity and darken our souls, fouling whole continents at a time and seriously fucking up our destinies. See if you can figure out who the narrator is.

You can find the poem here:



I realize there are some difficult words, including many foreign words, in this one. The Easter Eggs may help.

And here again, I need to express my profound gratitude to =AzizrianDaoXrak for suggesting the poem and =LadyofGaerdon for featuring it. You both have my heart for your constant support!





update 03-03-2013

It seems I have more to add here.

I am honored that my poem The Word Rape of a Minor Poet was selected as the “Pick of the Day” and featured by =DailyLitDeviations for March 13, 2013. Special thanks to the very kind `Kneeling-Glory for featuring it!

Here is the poem (beware, though, I have heard that reading this is a punishing experience):










the basic facts

I am an admin/contributor for these groups:


:iconthings-not-seen: Ż :iconcanon-users: Ż :iconprosepoetry-elegance:


Occasionally I make some kind of art something with 3D modeling software and the like. Lately I write more and imprison light everywhere I can.

random fandom



noughtagroos is no more

the "noughtagroos" username sleeps with the fishes. =tonepainter is happening now.

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Truth, mariner
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True Grits
=tonepainter

Truth, mariner
Writer. Photographer. 3D Hobbyist.

 
Strangers passing in the street
By chance two separate glances meet
And I am you and what I see is me.
      — Roger Waters, “Echoes

No. Not this pig.
      — Philip Levine, “Animals Are Passing From Our Lives

At worse, one is in motion; and at best,
Reaching no absolute, in which to rest,
One is always nearer by not keeping still.
      — Thom Gunn, “On The Move

These fragments I have shored against my ruins
      — T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land

These are amazing: each
Joining a neighbor, as though speech
Were a still performance.
      —John Ashbery, “Some Trees

Easter Eggs:
All of my written pieces have Easter Eggs of a sort.... usually in places where you might need want clues.


























































Interests

What Title Should I Use for My Six Word Story (Currently Called "Wall to Wall") 

23%
3 deviants said Wall to Wall
15%
2 deviants said Meow!
15%
2 deviants said I Hereby Invoke All Meanings of the Word "Mew"
8%
1 deviant said All the Cool Cats Are Doing It
8%
1 deviant said Shagadelic!
8%
1 deviant said Out of the Bag, On to the Shag
8%
1 deviant said Puddy Cats
8%
1 deviant said Catachresis
8%
1 deviant said Pussy Galore
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No deviants said This whole thing is a childish, dirty joke and I'm never reading your junk again!

Easter Eggs????

…but how would you find them?


Want a clue? Start here.


 

Where Would You Find My Fiction?

And how should you find it?
My fiction belongs in a brown paper bag.

If there is some intersection between “philosophy,” “true crime,” “the noise that flies make in sound-proof rooms,” “shaggy dog stories,” “sci-fi,” and “things Ed Meese wanted to ban—but only after pleasuring himself while reading them,” then that’s the shelf where you’d find my work.

By the way, the FBI has cameras trained on that shelf, where my work sits decidedly alone. Don’t ever pick up one of my books, or else your name and photo will go in a database, and we all know what happens next.

For starters, some pretentious idiot will pull up a blurry shot of you from a bad angle and utter that fearsome incantation of our times:
computer, enhance!

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`FuzzyHoser 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
K-Beeeeear!!! There's a creepy man in the office flirting with me and I don't like it one bit. Come out here and kick his ass! You know you're the only fella allowed to be crude and inappropriate towards me. Save meeeeeeee!!!
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=tonepainter 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Yikes, just saw this... damn. Please ask him whether I should mail the various bits of gore and crackling that will be all that remains of him to his mom, or should I go and make mincemeat out of her, too? 'Cause I won't tolerate one bit of rudeness out of anyone towards my favorite fishie!
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`FuzzyHoser 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Can we take out his brother, too? I really don't like him, either, K-Bear. They all give me the willies. And I know you'll protect me from those scummy types.

:heart::fish:
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=tonepainter 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's take out their whole gene pool, which obviously has major flaws in it...better they had never been born, 'cause K-Bear's loaded for bear!

Let me at 'em :chainsaw:

:heart:
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*Hfeather53 May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so very much for the fave :heart:
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=tonepainter May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :D
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=Sammur-amat May 7, 2013   General Artist
:iconthxfavplz: I really appreciate it! :love:
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~wishsister May 6, 2013  New member Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you for my Llama, kind sir:)
Would you tell me what the Llama means?
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=tonepainter May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Doesn't mean much of anything, other than as something silly dA came up with so that people could exchange them and/or give them to people whose pages they thought were cool, or just as a way of saying "hi!".

When they first came out, a lot of people got really obsessed with collecting them, which is incredibly silly, IMHO. But they are fun, if one is willing to take them that way.

I give them out to anyone who ever "faves" one of my pieces, and also to random people, and of course to people I like. :D
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Mood: Drooling ~wishsister May 8, 2013  New member Professional Traditional Artist
I am in favor of the llama :) Thank you!
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