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About Varied / Hobbyist Official Beta Tester Truth, marinerMale/United States Groups :iconthings-not-seen: Things-Not-Seen
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While I like the opening line, I think overall this reads like an early draft of what could end up being a good poem. This isn't fully coherent yet. The hard work you have to do to try to piece anything out of this isn't paid off, and much of the ambiguity isn't from a literary quality, but from lac...

by vespera

This is devastating genius:I have wanted to return – Won't you tuck me in and whisper to me about home, the restitution and the earthy womb? the quiet – O', Sylvia, tell me of the quiet. Consider my soul somewhat in awe and ajitter. You asked for suggestions about enjambment, so here goes: I think t...

The only thing worse than being talked about is not being talked about.

—Oscar Wilde


They say love is a universal language. Maybe. Maybe tomorrow. Tonight it is grief.…


Truth, mariner
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United States

True Grits

Truth, mariner
Writer. Photographer. 3D Hobbyist.

Strangers passing in the street
By chance two separate glances meet
And I am you and what I see is me.
      — Roger Waters, “Echoes

No. Not this pig.
      — Philip Levine, “Animals Are Passing From Our Lives

At worse, one is in motion; and at best,
Reaching no absolute, in which to rest,
One is always nearer by not keeping still.
      — Thom Gunn, “On The Move

These fragments I have shored against my ruins
      — T.S. Eliot, The Waste Land

These are amazing: each
Joining a neighbor, as though speech
Were a still performance.
      —John Ashbery, “Some Trees

Easter Eggs:
All of my written pieces have Easter Eggs of a sort.... usually in places where you might need want clues.


What Title Should I Use for My Six Word Story (Currently Called "Wall to Wall") 

3 deviants said Wall to Wall
2 deviants said All the Cool Cats Are Doing It
2 deviants said Shagadelic!
2 deviants said Pussy Galore
2 deviants said Meow!
2 deviants said I Hereby Invoke All Meanings of the Word "Mew"
1 deviant said Out of the Bag, On to the Shag
1 deviant said Puddy Cats
1 deviant said Catachresis
1 deviant said This whole thing is a childish, dirty joke and I'm never reading your junk again!

Easter Eggs????

…but how would you find them?

Want a clue? Start here.


Where Would You Find My Fiction?

And how should you find it?
My fiction belongs in a brown paper bag.

If there is some intersection between “philosophy,” “true crime,” “the noise that flies make in sound-proof rooms,” “shaggy dog stories,” “sci-fi,” and “things Ed Meese wanted to ban—but only after pleasuring himself while reading them,” then that’s the shelf where you’d find my work.

By the way, the FBI has cameras trained on that shelf, where my work sits decidedly alone. Don’t ever pick up one of my books, or else your name and photo will go in a database, and we all know what happens next.

For starters, some pretentious idiot will pull up a blurry shot of you from a bad angle and utter that fearsome incantation of our times:
computer, enhance!


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wordeea Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ! :)
tonepainter Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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TinaLevis Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
thanks for the important part of life 
tonepainter Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure!
TinaLevis Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
nice work
tonepainter Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :D
katjanettemodel Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Professional Artist
Thanks for watching!
tonepainter Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure...and welcome to dA! 
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